Finally! Well, not really. It takes 10+ hours EVERY time. 9.6. I love it though. I reverted back to computer-lettering. Yes, yes, I hate myself for it too. But, NOTHING is consistant in this comic...look, my speech bubbles are pretty. Talk about inconsistent.
Things I like about this page:
-Todd is in every panel! Freddy is in ALMOST every panel.
-All members of the Brotherhood are present...including Pietro...even though it's just his legs.
-Lance walking away. Ahhhh an excuse to draw Lance's ass, FINALLY!
-Wanda cares, dawwwwww. That's right. MY Wanda cares.
-Todd suggests something intelligent.
Things I find hilarious about this page:
-Todd and Lance notice there's blood on their hands at relatively the same moment.
-Apparently they lost all power in the room leading TO the kitchen.
-Lance and Todd are totally having Lady MacBeth moments in the first two panels. XD
-Lance is also totally having a "broody-single-dad" moment in the last panel. XD
Nice buns That is so Lance, wanting to do things his own way. I also like how he's walking out of the last panel with his arms out in that "I'm a badass" way. Also, I like the way Wanda looks in this. And their expressions are very on point here. Good job! And I'm left wondering what is going to happen now to poor Pietro! Continue!
Great page. Anything by you is always worth any wait.
One, I love Lance in the last panel. You can really feel his anger, frustration and whatnot. It's a great effect with the lights outside the kitchen off.
Two, Todd in every panel and Freddy in almost-every panel is awesome. But that's besides the point.
YAY! You posted it! I love it colored. Nice job on the blood, by the way. Most people just put red and are done, but you give it shades of color.
Nice job! ^-^
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I love it, awsome, spetacular. Your coloring jobs are always so awsome! I just posted the first page of my comic, but I'm a lazy B so it's uncolored.
Reading through it was so dramatic, but once I got down to your comments on it I burst out laughing and it brought me right back up. I love this comice, can't wait for the next one!
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God this just keeps on getting more and more exciting! I love the way you portrayed both Lance and Todd here. Also, your colouring is very well done! The effort you put into this definitely shows. Awesome work!
Poor Lance. He really feels the pressure of being the leader of these misfits, and when shit like this happens, he must be holding onto himself really tightly to not have a mental breakdown.
Lance's ace, wooyeah. Another comic page - the late panel has to be my fav. Not just for Lance ass, but it has all the characters in a moody, tense atmosphere.
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I can't see my forehead >:[
One, I love Lance in the last panel. You can really feel his anger, frustration and whatnot. It's a great effect with the lights outside the kitchen off.
Two, Todd in every panel and Freddy in almost-every panel is awesome. But that's besides the point.
Three, I love the concern Wanda's feeling.
Can't wait for page 5.
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Nice job! ^-^
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Reading through it was so dramatic, but once I got down to your comments on it I burst out laughing and it brought me right back up. I love this comice, can't wait for the next one!
Much love from TDY
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"Broody-single-dad" is so dead-on for Lance. xD
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